Vegita's Pets
Reviews
Chapter I
Name: Kayla
Rating: 10
Reason For Rating: It was Cute and very funny
Comments: I love the site and youve done a great job! I'm a big fan
of PV and thats how I got to your site!
Name: Reber
Comments: LMAO!!! Hmmmm, Piccolo as a pet... (Looks at him
evilly...) I LOVED it!!! Keep up the good work, and I hope Vegeta finds a pet
soon :)
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: Aw, if Vegeta can't keep Piccolo, can I have him? *puppy
dog eyes*
Name: Sukoshi Aki
Comments: This is a hilarious ficcy! ^-^ I was laughing the whole
time! Lol! Especially the 2nd chapter! You're going on my fave authors and ure
fic's goin on my fave stories!
Name: not a saiya-jin. you heard me
Comments: Whooo! The funniest DBZ fanfic I've read so far.
Name:
Assasin Zero
Website
Rating: It Is So Good That I Shall Worship It Forever!
Reason For Rating: Mmm,maybe because it has to be the funniest
thing I've ever read; man, and getting Piccolo, Goku, Brolly and Marron as
pets....pure genius!
Name: Ilweran
Comments: Very funny ^___^
Name: fffg
Comments: hahahaha funny
Name: ASDF
Comments: LMAO LMAO LMAO
Name: Gohan
Comments: You rule
Name: Rebecca
Waesch
Comments: "Hey Bulma, I'm home." "Hey, Veggie, how did...what is
THAT??" "A Goku-eating, firebreathing dragon. Why?" "Grrrrr....."
Name: Phillip
Remsburg --- AKA Son Neko
Comments: I think Vegeta thought a pet that wasnt dangerous to HIM
Name: SMoon
Comments: That story's pretty funny!
Name: M.Jade
Comments: *falls over laughing* That was funny ... *shakes head*
What part of "an animal that's not dangerous" did he not understand?? Great job!
Name: bumla175_2000
Comments: that was great
Name: Quaxo
Comments: *laughs hysterically and is unable to type anything*
Name: Blitz
Comments: This was really great!! I cracked up at the Namek one,
then the Saiya-jins. Man, this was cool! You write the funniest!
Name: Anija
Comments: *LOL* I wanna pet Namek....
Name:
Titania Rose
Comments: LOL!!!!!! This is so funny. I loved the last part!!!
Vegeta was so cute! Ja ne!
Name: Aeryn
Comments: LMAOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Name: gohan
Comments: VERY VERY FUNNY! I WAS CRACKING UP LAUGHING! YOU SHOULD
WRITE ANOTHER ONE LIKE THAT!
Name: Chelsee
Comments: PWAHAHAHAHAA! Oh, MAN that was good! I want a pet Namek!!
I want a pet Saiyan! Vegita can keep Marron, though. #18 would kill me if I
kidnapped her daughter....
Name: Rei-san
Rating: It is so good that I shall worship it forever!
Reason For Rating: IT KICKS BUTT!! it too is in the all-holy book
of fanfiction.
Comments: hahahahahahahahahaha...etc. funny! ~.O
Name: Witch Cat
Rating: (Best)
Reason For Rating: BWAHAHAHAHAHA! This is possibly the funniest
thing ever!
Comments: Is it posted on fanfiction.net? if not it should be!
Name:
Unknown
Rating: 7
Reason For Rating: cuz its insane,but it would be 9 or 8 out of 10
if it was longer...
Comments: pretty good,but if it was longer it would be better ^_^
Name: Deiny
Website
Rating: 9
Reason For Rating: It's very funny, but a wee bit short. Otherwise,
It's a damn fine fic. ^__^
Comments: Hehehe...You can't go wrong with a vegeta-humor fic...
Chapter II
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: Nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No piccolo is Piccolo
not FLUFFY! My Namek *Chi grabs Piccolo possesively and sticks her tongue out at
Vegeta.
Name: Rebecca
Waesch
Comments: Oookay....
Name: SMoon
Comments: ROFL
Name: Gracie Poo or Kiwi-Sama
Comments: Uhh..that's just messed up..-.-
Name: M.Jade
Comments: Piccolo again? Narwhal??? ROFL ... Great job!
Name: Sumi
Comments: Hehe... Fluffy the Namek.
Name: Jade
Tatsu
Comments: hehehehe! Oh boy, Vejiita is really messed up but it's
funny! Calling Piccolo fluffy. On dear, are we going to see a part three?
Name:
bumla175_2000
Comments: that was great write more!!!!!!
Name: gohan
Comments: HILARIOS YOU HAVE GOT TO KEEP WRITING MORE STORIES LIKE
THIS!!!! XD XD XD XD XD I CANT STOP LAUGHING XD XD XD XD XD XD XD HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
Name: L.A.
Comments: That was...different...
Name: Quaxo
Comments: Me thinks Vegeta had a little overdose of cough medicine
Name: Just a
Thought
Comments: Ahhahaha! Jeez, are you trying to make us all laugh to
death!? The talking narwhal almost made me fall out of my chair!
Name: Tinni
Comments: I think you are disturbed.
Name: mclance
Comments: Hahahahhahahaah!!!!!!! That was funny.
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Woahahahahahha! That was good! Oh, how I love the thought
of Vegita dragging Piccolo around on a leash.....hee hee hee.
Name:
Titania Rose
Comments: Hey Mike, once again, you outdid yourself! LOL!!! Great
story! Vegeta was hilarious, but why would he want a unicorn? A unicorn is too
beautiful for him. Hmm, maybe a gargoyle would best befit his tastes... What do
you think? Oh well, poor V-chan, stuck with a Namek again! Really good! Luv ya!
Ja ne!
Name: Rei-san
Rating: It is so good that I shall worship it forever!
Reason For Rating: erhem do i have to repeat it??
Comments: hahahahahahahahahahahahaha *gaaaaaaaaasp* etc.
Name:
Unknown
Rating: 9
Reason For Rating: cuz he found a namek...I WANNA NAMEK!!!
Comments: namek namek namek!!gimme a namek pet,i like it i like it!
Chapter III
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: Piccolo, bad, put Vegeta down and come her *Piccolo drops
Vegeta and scampers over to where Chi is. She's currently holding a saucer of
cream* Good Namek *scraches his antennas, piccolo purrs*
Name: Sukoshi Aki
Comments: LMAO! Icky-witchy-wonka!
Name: SMoon
Comments: That's just ... disturbing, but funny!
Name: M.Jade
Comments: Piccolo feels ... LOVED??? LMAO!! That's hilarious!
*shakes head* Vegeta kissing "his pet" goodbye. Hey, I want a Zarbon for a pet!!
^_^
Name: Super Saiyan Alexin
Comments: HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!LMAO!!!!!!
Name: gohan
Comments: HILARIOUS!!! VERY FUNNY!!! WRITE MORE!!! HAHAHAHAHA I
STILL CAN'T STOP LAUGHING FROM...ICKY-WITCHY-WONKA!!!
Name: Blitz
Comments: ROTFLMAO!!!
Name: Quaxo
Comments: *snickers* There must be more of this!
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Wahahahaha.....OH MY GOD!!! Steele, this just plain
scared me (eesh, and you call ME crazy.......) But, YOU MUST MAKE MORE!! Great,
now I keep thinking of Piccolo trying to eat fine china.......creepy picture. I
WANT A PET ZARBON!!!
Name: adimra
Comments: AHHHhahah. Absolutely hilarious.
Name: ice queen
Comments: Icky witchy wonka?!!! Where in the world did you get that
one? That was scary, but strangely extremely funny. Keep it up, I can't wait to
find out how Piccolo gets his revenge!
Name: Just a Thought
Comments: Hahahahahaha! You gotta make this a series. Please! It's
too funny. Hahahaha! Maybe next time you could even have Vegeta capture his new
"pet" in a Pokeball. Hahahaha! Keep up the good work.
Name: Leia
Comments: funny, I love the safari thing! hope you write another
part
Name: Prince
Vegeta
Comments: omg!!!!That was good!!! Do another!!!!
Name: Rei-san
Rating: It is so good that I shall worship it forever!
Reason For Rating: *repeats*
Comments: you know it.
Name:
Unknown
Rating: 8
Reason For Rating: cuz i like it ^_^
Comments: i'm gonna keep at this,but i still love this story ^_^
Chapter IV
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: Sicko, sicko, sicko! Aw, poor Piccy *cradles the
obviously disturbed Namek* Don't worry, we'll get you lots of therapy.
Name: Quaxo
Comments: I hope you're older than you appear in that photo of
yours, because you've got one weird and zany mind. I like it!
Name: SMoon
Comments: ROFL again ... Poor Piccolo and Zarbon!
Name: Blitz
Comments: ROTFLMAO!!! mating, oh gods thats too funny!!
Name: gohan
Comments: U REALLY DO LIKE BUNNY SUITS DON'T U?! anyways.....
HILARIOUS!!! ::falls off chair still laughing:: AHHHHHHH! ::laughs can be heard
from the floor:: HAHAHAHAHAHA ::gets back up:: I REALLY need to fix this chair!
anyways..... WRITE MORE!!!!
Name: Chelsee
Comments: .......AASAAAAAAAHHHH!! Steele, I think your brain has
warped......IN A SCARY, BUT GOOD WAY!! Piccolo nesting in the toilette? Vegita
eating make up? Oh, my, the mental visuals that accumpany those words.......
Name: Prince Vegeta
Comments: OMG!!! That was so good!!! When did I give you permission
to use the bunny suit!!!!!!! Thats mine!!!! just kidding. hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!
Name: Daphni Dragon
Comments: ROTFL.... Please do another! I just love them!!
Name: Leia
Comments: You are one sick puppy...write more! ^_^
Name: Just a Thought
Comments: Do another! Do another!
Name: ice queen
Comments: You are one sick...Depraved guy, I loved it! Do another!
Do another!
Name: M.Jade
Comments: Zarbon on a leash? Vegeta riding on Zarbon's back??
Mating rituals??? ROFL ... You've gotta stop, or I'm gonna bust a gut! Great job
once again!
Name: Darkstorm
Comments: Freeza and Ginyu...MATING?!?!...MUST...BLOCK...MENTAL...IMAGE
Name:
Unknown
Rating: 5
Reason For Rating: cuz it got a bit worse and more confusing...
Comments: *sighs* i'll keep reading,but this time its only a 5
Chapter V
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Bad author, Bad bad
author! *smacks Mike over the head* As for you *turns to Piccolo* my poor little
Namek, let's go find Gohan for you
Name: Wolf Mother
Comments: OH MY GODDDD!!! ZARRRRBBBOOOOONNNNNN!!!! NOOOOOOOO! I
wanted to have se- nevermind. Let's just drop it. Heretic. (nods solemnly.)
Name: dsafashfgadf
Comments: That was wrong. Very twisted. It's not nice to fix Zarbon...I
wanted to "mate with iw
Name: destiny
Comments: hahahehe...that was pure evil
Name: Quaxo
Comments: *snickers*
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Steele, my friend...... What have you been eating! I
think you've finally gone and snapped that last thread that connected you to
sanity, and for some reason it came out in this bizare, hilarious fifth
insalment of madness. It must be the failt of one of your many split
personalities......
Name: Prince
Vegeta
Comments: that was good!!!!! I dont feel sorry for Zarbon at
all!!!! Hahahahahahaha!!!!!
Name: M.Jade
Comments: OH MY GOD! Are you INSANE?!? Poor Zarbon ... Zarbon-burgers
... Namek chops! Namek chops!!! Bwa ha ha ha ha! That's hilarious! Great job.
*holds sides, and falls over laughing*
Name: gohan
Comments: FUNNY,VERY FUNNY! SHORT THOUGH BUT FUNNY! WRITE MORE!
Name: Daphni Dragon
Comments: LMAO!! Are you going to do more? Please!
Name: Shadode
Comments: *laughs till she screams*
Name: Just a Thought
Comments: Heeheehee. Poor Zarbon...poor Goku.
Name: unknown
Comments: FUNNY!!!!
Name:
Robert Bingham
Comments: Zarbon-burgers?!?! OMG! Get Vegeta mad enough, and he'll
resort to damn near anything! HA HA HA HA HA!
Name: ice queen
Comments: Have I mentioned the fact that you are really disturbed?
Well, you are, but it seems to be a good thing in this instance. That was really
funny!
Name:
Unknown
Rating: (Worst)
Reason For Rating: BECAUSE NO ONE EATS PICCOLO!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments: NO MORE OF THAT EATING PICCOLO JUNK!!!!PICCOLO IS NOT
FOOD!!!NAMEKS ARE SUPPERIOR TO YOU WEAK PATHETIC HUMANS!!! *is a saiyan*
Chapter VI
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: Yes! Vegeta's make great pets!
Name: Chuquita
Comments: OMG! That was one of the most unique fics I've ever read!
(snickers) Lorretta. I have to find the other parts to this fic so I know how
this all happened...
Name: Connet
Comments: Poor veggie. (I NEVER thought I'd say that. ^_^)
Name: JR
Comments: Boring and too obvious. It ruined the till here very
funny story.
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Pwahahahhaa! Finally one where Goku does the terrorizing!
That was totally necisary! Hahahahahaha!~ Lorretta!! Wahaha!
Name:
VegetaMan
Comments: Hilarious! Write more!
Name: Quaxo
Comments: I never knew Kakarott was into sadism. I like it though!!
Name: -------------
Comments: HAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!!!!!!! funny!!!!!!!! (i picture
everything i read) Vegeta.... w/ a puffball 4 hair....... Goku's pet......
jumping hoops?!?! hehehehehehhehehehehe
Name: Silver_Dragon86
Comments: Hahaha,Vegeta a pet poodle?Haha poor vegeta.
Name: King Kai
Comments: ROTFL HOHOHO HAHA HEHEHEHE HOOOOOO!!!!! That was a hoot!
*bangs on the ground*
Name: Just a Thought
Comments: That was disturbing, disturbingly funny that is. :)
Name: trunks
Comments: Oh, way to embarrass dad, i'll need to use this for some
blackmail....
Name: Prince Vegeta
Comments: O MY GOD!!!!!I CANT STOP LAUGHING!!!!!!
Name: ice queen
Comments: I can't type, I'm laughuibng too hard! Lorretta! Yes!
Name: "*&&@
Comments: Contrary to some stupid rumours, Tien and Chaozou are NOT
gay. Tien has a girlfriend, okay? She LIVES with him! She just got cut out of
the North America version. There. I think I've made my point. Also, how many
Chaozous ARE there in this story? How can Piccolo eat him every day? Funny, sort
of.
Name: Prince
Vegeta
Comments: HAHAAHAHA!!!!!!! ROFLMAO!!! That was hilarious!!!!
Another job well done!!!
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Ahhhh!! Steele, what have you done? You made me laugh
myself stupid. No, really. I was left stunned and think I suffered braindamage
trying not to snort in the library (I have a bad habid of snorting instead of
laughing) So, all I can say is AAAAHHH!! You crazed little monkey! Write the
next part! You'll have to call it "Goku's Pet" now..... Heh heh heh.....
Name: Just a Thought
Comments: Hahahaha! ROTFLMAO! *gasps for air* The next part ought
to be good! Veggie on a leash. Heehee.
Name: Miraimari aka Mari-chan
Comments: LoL that's was the best one so far! Fried-Chaozou, Vegeta
giving Piccolo a bath, the brother-emporer-wife-husband-pet part, it was all too
funny! Now Vegeta looking like a poodle, if I try to imagine that I'm going to
laugh too hard!
Name: M.Jade
Comments: OH MY GOD!!! Brother-emporer-wife-husband-pet????? What
the hell??? LOL Oh, that was funny! Veggie, Kakarot's pet?? Why did I just say
Kakarot?? *falls over* Great job!
Name: mclance
Comments: Poor Vegita, Poor Piccolo, Poor Tien!
Name: lol
Comments: LOL Poodle!!!!!!
Name: gohan
Comments: HAHAHAHAHAHA!! A POODLE?! WHERE DO U GET THIS STUFF?!
HAHAHAHAHAHA!! KEEP WRITING MORE...ESPECIALLY ONES LIKE THIS!!
Name:
Robert Bingham
Comments: HA HA HA HA HA! Who would have thought Goku would get fed
up with Vegeta's antics?
Name: ice queen
Comments: Choatzu-deprivation????? Bath? Poodle!!!! I think that
just messed me up in the head even more then I already was! Thanx alot, Mike, I
was just starting to get good at pretending to be normal before I read this.
Name: Quaxo
Comments: *nearly dies from laughter* Alright, there's gotta be
more!!
Name:
Unknown
Rating: (Worst)
Reason For Rating: BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD i HATE it now!!
Comments: I HATE IT IT MUST BE GONE!!!
Chapter VII
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: What the !@#$ is the obsesion with fried Chout Zu? Bad
Piccolo *Piccolo whines as Chi takes away his latest treat*
Name: Demon King Piccolo
Comments: what goku did to vegeta was way,WAY overboard,what vegeta
did to his pets wasn't even THAT bad.But the story was still great,though!I
loved it!
Name:
Unknown
Rating: (Worst)
Reason For Rating: worse...
Comments: it...must...DIE!!!!DIE YOU EVIL PIECE OF (censored due to
EXTREME cursing(extreme as in no one,NO ONE,can even come close to this much
cursing))
Chapter VIII
Name: firefly
Comments: Simply hilarious!
Name: Princess Chi
Comments: AW, poor Vegeta. Piccolo, you have my permission to do
whatever you want to this deranged author.
Name: melody
Comments: O_o
Name: summerkangaroo
Comments: dude! r ya gonna make more chapters? this is really cute
and funny! whoever wrote those replies in one of the previous chapters should
CHILL. i mean. this is a FANFIC people! in fanfics, you ARE allowed to CHANGE
some things!
Name:
Unknown
Rating: (Worst)
Reason For Rating: 10 times worse then last episode...
Comments: i hate you author...you know what i'd do when i see you?i
would whip you repeativly...letting you heal then whip you more,and more,letting
you live,but torturing you!!!thats the only way i can say what i'm gonna do...
Name: Nene Sword
Comments: Funny! Funny! Ow.