Picnic Problems
Reviews

Chapter 1

Name:  Zephyr*
Comments:  i'm crying......it's just so funny....keep writing, it's awesome

Name:  chichiX
Comments:  That is by far the strangest thing I have ever read in levels of supposed sanity.

Name:  Dragonfliess
Comments:  Hee hee! very funny! You write a lot of stuff don't you? Its side splitting! Write another one! Like a day out at a theme park! You'd make it hilarious! V. good! I loved it!

Name:  18
Comments:  funny story, bad ending. Gotta continue!!!

Name:  Col Sanders
Comments:  HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA AHHHHHH HAHAHAHA HAAAAA Ooh funny, very funny!!!COl Sanders

Name:  Nik Nak
Comments:  Mwahahahaa!!! This was too cool!! Funny stuff!

Name:  Gohan hugger
Comments:  gohan: what a....nice....day....hehe

Name:  Pui Pui
Comments:  Dude this is ing CRAP!!!!!!!!!!

Name:  47
Comments:  Um...uh...it was neither good nor bad, really.

Name:  Lady Squirt
Comments:  Oh NO! TRUnks' HAIR! Very Funny! Everyone had stuff spitting out from every ware, Hehehehehehehe.

Name:  Ahab
Comments:  nooo not the hair. hair is a sai-jins pride and joy that is how you spell sai-jins right? i liked it

Name:  LAAAAAAAAAAAAG
Comments:  LAAAAAAAAAAG LAAAAAAAAAAAG LAAAAAG LAAG LAAAAAAAG LAAAAAG LAAAAG LAAAAAG LAAAAAG LAAAG LAAAAAAAAAGGGG!!!!!

Name:  Veggie-chan12
Comments:  HAHAHAHHAHHAHHAHAH!(explodes from laughter)

NameThe West Virginian
Comments:  A...fearful...Piccolo. Uh-huh. That's plausible. And such an excellent sense of closure, too.

Name:  Chelsee
Comments:  O_o!! Woo, Steele! I remember when you sent this to me and.......it was as mind numbingly odd as it is right now. In a good way, my man. In a good way. Hahahahah!

Name:  mysticGohan33
Comments:  ACK! poor trunks! hehehe

Name:  Marshall Mathers
Comments:  AHAHAHAHAHAHA-ahem.That was so fu*king funny!!You should write a sequel.

Name:  L.A. Whitfield
Comments:  I burst out laughing when I read that Krillin ear sprinkler bit! HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Love it!

Name:  Someone
Comments:  OH GOD! I THINK I BUSTED A GUT,THAT WAS SOOOOO FUNNY!!

Name:  classifeid
Comments:  very funny

Name:  Aeris_43
Comments:  funny!write more! Aeris

Name:  Galatea
Comments:  Tee hee! Very funny.

Name:  Quaxo
Comments:  Great to have you back! Great story too!

Name:  Gohan hugger
Comments:  noooooo! trunks chan's beautiful hair!