Picnic Problems
Reviews
Chapter 1
Name: Zephyr*
Comments: i'm crying......it's just so funny....keep writing, it's
awesome
Name: chichiX
Comments: That is by far the strangest thing I have ever read in
levels of supposed sanity.
Name: Dragonfliess
Comments: Hee hee! very funny! You write a lot of stuff don't you?
Its side splitting! Write another one! Like a day out at a theme park! You'd
make it hilarious! V. good! I loved it!
Name: 18
Comments: funny story, bad ending. Gotta continue!!!
Name: Col Sanders
Comments: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA AHHHHHH HAHAHAHA HAAAAA Ooh funny,
very funny!!!COl Sanders
Name: Nik Nak
Comments: Mwahahahaa!!! This was too cool!! Funny stuff!
Name: Gohan hugger
Comments: gohan: what a....nice....day....hehe
Name: Pui Pui
Comments: Dude this is ing CRAP!!!!!!!!!!
Name: 47
Comments: Um...uh...it was neither good nor bad, really.
Name: Lady Squirt
Comments: Oh NO! TRUnks' HAIR! Very Funny! Everyone had stuff
spitting out from every ware, Hehehehehehehe.
Name: Ahab
Comments: nooo not the hair. hair is a sai-jins pride and joy that
is how you spell sai-jins right? i liked it
Name: LAAAAAAAAAAAAG
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LAAAAG LAAAAAG LAAAAAG LAAAG LAAAAAAAAAGGGG!!!!!
Name: Veggie-chan12
Comments: HAHAHAHHAHHAHHAHAH!(explodes from laughter)
Name: The West
Virginian
Comments: A...fearful...Piccolo. Uh-huh. That's plausible. And such
an excellent sense of closure, too.
Name: Chelsee
Comments: O_o!! Woo, Steele! I remember when you sent this to me
and.......it was as mind numbingly odd as it is right now. In a good way, my
man. In a good way. Hahahahah!
Name: mysticGohan33
Comments: ACK! poor trunks! hehehe
Name: Marshall Mathers
Comments: AHAHAHAHAHAHA-ahem.That was so fu*king funny!!You should
write a sequel.
Name: L.A. Whitfield
Comments: I burst out laughing when I read that Krillin ear
sprinkler bit! HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Love it!
Name: Someone
Comments: OH GOD! I THINK I BUSTED A GUT,THAT WAS SOOOOO FUNNY!!
Name: classifeid
Comments: very funny
Name: Aeris_43
Comments: funny!write more! Aeris
Name: Galatea
Comments: Tee hee! Very funny.
Name: Quaxo
Comments: Great to have you back! Great story too!
Name: Gohan hugger
Comments: noooooo! trunks chan's beautiful hair!