Gohan: Holder Of Rage
Reviews
Chapter 1
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Woo! Don't know when I missed this one! I read it
at PlanetNamek..........AND THIS IS WAY BETTER!! Got a bit more of a plot to it,
and all. Love your work, and there had better be a next part, or it's KAPOWIE
for you! *shakes fist in threatening way*
Name: Just a
Thought
Comments: What to say, what to say...hmmm. Please do the next
part soon! I'm dying to read more of this version!
Name: Gohan
Comments: frieza wouldn't be that weak, great fic though
Name:
mysticGohan33
Comments: I tried to read this at your site, but my computer
crashed > Þ so here I am! on a scale of one to ten, it is definitely a ten!
Name: mysticGohan33
Comments: great! as usual... ^_^
Name: Gohan hugger
Comments: this is my kinda' fic!
Name: diamond_unicorn
Comments: That was very good. I liked it.
Name: Serusama
Comments: Mike Steele? Gohan: Holder of Rage? Now I remember
you? You're that author everyone talked about on www.planetnamek.com
messageboard about how awful your fanfic was. Now that I've read it for myself,
it truly does suck. You, my friend, have seen too many Funimation DBZ Episodes.
The dialogue is way off and cheesy. The charactering was down right awful and
the climax was stupid beyond believe. Fanfic authors like you should be dragged
out into the street wrapped in spiked lance chains and drug seven miles down the
road at 180 mph and shot in a public execution style
Name:
Sierra
Rating: (Best)
Reason For Rating: Rose's lil' girl:Ok many people don't know this
but Sierra has spilt personality's! Tinna:AND HERE WE ARE! Sierra:DON'T TELL THE
WORLD!!! Dasiey:but they already did. Sierra:I'm rating it this cuz....GOHAN IS
SOOOO CUTE!!!! Rlg:I KNOW!!!!! Tinna Sweatdrops and Dasiey face falts
Comments: Sierra:IT IS SOOOOOOO COOL!!! Rlg:Dose gohan realy have
an attack called masanko-punch? Tinna:NO WAY Mike Steele just made it up Sierra
& Rlg:DON'T SAY THAT ABOUT OR IDEL!!! *They start punching tinna and dasiey*
^_^'
Name: Stephen
Rating: 7
Comments: Freaky
Chapter 2
Name:
Daughter of Chaos
Comments: Oops, sorry I didn't comment on the last one, so
shoot me (no, don't do that, it'll be bloody and messy, and, well, you get the
point). I like this version, nice touchups compared to the old. Please, keep
writting!
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Awe, DAMN, Freiza is one SICK bastard! Well
desribed, Steele, and you'd better put the next part out faster! I'm gonna get
on ya till ya do! You will never be able to post fast enough to satisfy me!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Name: Gohan
Comments: The plot thickens great fic 5.5/10
Name: mysticGohan33
Comments: ten million? Yay Gohan! Yay you! great story!!!
Name: Mr. Get all you other faggots mad
Comments: Hhuhmh,, , first of all Goku didn't die on namek
you dumbass.. Second, Freiza is a faggot why waste time writing about the idiot
Name: mysticGohan33
Comments: 'Freiza is prettier...' hehe. btw, I am reviewing
most of yours again with 'new eyes' so to speak...
Name: Gohan hugger
Comments: like i said, I'm so proud of my muse!
Name: diamond_unicorn
Comments: That was great!
Chapter 3
Name: Shadowspinner
Rating: 10
Comments: ITt's sort of sad...
Name: vmr
Comments: Awesome story. Just love reading about Gohan
beating other people.
Name: Paladone
Comments: Isn't this the fanfiction that's on
Planetnamek.com? This is an old one. I think it's good, but jeez, Gohan's just a
WEE bit more powerful than usual. I'll go to you're website in a minute.
Name: Jackie
Comments: YOUR STORY RRRRRROOOOOXXXXXXX!!!!!! IT'S THE BEST
FAN FIC STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE.... AND BELIEVE ME I HAVE READ
MILLIONS.....DBZ IS MY FAV TV SHOW OUT OF EVERY OTHER SHOW ON TELEVISION AND MY
FAV CHARACTER IS GOHAN BECAUSE HE IS THE MOST POWERFUL BEING IN THE UNIVERSE AND
THIS STORY PROVES JUST HOW INCREDIBLY POWERFUL HE IS.......YOUR STORY IS THE
BADDEST!!!
Name: Chelsee
Comments: Woo, is that the last part? Gohan
just....obliterates the whole galaxy? Wow, THERE'S a shocker. DON'T MAKE THAT
KID MAD!!!
Name: barbo-chan
Comments: i agree with Chelsee. just don't get Gohan mad!! he
just blew up the whole galaxy!! well, that was, ummm... AAAAAAAH!!!!! I DON'T
WANT THE GALAXY TO BE DESTROYED!!!!!! does he even realize what he did? byeth
byeth!!!
Name:
Eric
Comments: bad ass, the power levels seemed to be a little
high, but Gohan killed everyone, so it can't be all bad
Name: Goku
Comments: i learned you should never piss Gohan off
Name: mysticGohan33
Comments: Eep! nice twist...is Gohan dead? is there a next
part? am I starting to sound like that stupid narrator guy???? great story,love
what you did with Gohan ^_^
Name:
mercurious
Comments: um....i like it but it seems a little incomplete
dont you think? well gots to go bye!
Name: Seats
Comments: great, but what about the end? i still say 9/10
though...
Name: mysticGohan33
Comments: the entire galaxy? yeesh... great job!
Name: Gohan hugger
Comments: ouchies
Name: diamond_unicorn
Comments: Um.....ur.....uh....Gohan went ssj, ssj2, and ssj3
all at once? And you destroyed the whole galaxy? Well, I can say one thing. This
was very different from the normal a/u story where Gohan kills Freiza.
Name: Paladone
Comments: This was actually the very first fanfiction I ever
read. Kinda brings back the memories of ye olden days when all fanfiction was
handled with dignity and care. Well, good job!
Name: Katarik
Comments: Cool
Name: FUGE
Comments: Great story but if you hadnt blown up the entire
universe then it could have been longer LOL!:-) keep writing:)
Name:
Sierra
Rating: (Best)
Reason For Rating: SIERRA:IT WAS COOL
Comments: Sierra:Now class what have we learned from the story??Rlg
rases her hand. Sierra:Is there anyone else?Rlg waves her hand.Sierra anyone?Rlg
is waveing her hands everywere.Sierra:I'LL PAY YOU!!!alright rlg.Rlg:THAT GOHAN
IS TOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!Dasiey:He's not as cute as Trunks.Tinna:YOUR BOTH WRONG
GOTEN IS MUCH CUTER!Sierra:CLASS SHUTUP!For one Rlg is right gohan is to
cute.rlg & sierra start talking bout how cute gohan is
Name: Stephen
Rating: 8