Name:  chikyuu
Comments:  mmmm, maybe they should skip the fireworks next year -putting explosive material in the hands of vegeta and piccolo,*shudder*...bad idea

Name:  Goku's Girl
Comments:  That was Cooooool! I am going to try that sometime!lol A fireworks fight!wooohoo sounds fun!

Name:  Lady Bulma
Comments:  lol, that was so funny! =^_^=

Name:  Rebecca Waesch
Comments:  Ookay, that was crazy.... I LOVED IT! That was really funny! Write more! bunny

Name:  Chelsee
Comments:  Woohahah! Man, that was great! A FIREWORKS FIGHT?! man, Steele, you really know how to make things go with a BANG! *ducks under varioius flyling instraments as people retaliate at her pun* Woo, I think Goku must have bought those 'fireworks' at a secret military base! I must say, you're the ONLY person I can stand making fun of Goku! You just don't know how good it feels to imerse myself into your wild world of madness!

Name:  Box Turtle
Comments:  Nice. Forest fire eh? :o)

Name:  Erin
Comments:  hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...... I wonder what would happen the next year..... If they all would come prepared......??????

Name:  Saiyajin Horse
Comments:  Good! I like it! What a way to celebrate the Fourth! But won't Vejiita be talking high-pitched for a while? Hehehehehehe! I've had sparkler-sword fights. They're loads o' fun! But if only Piccolo had thrown Black Cats at Vejiita...that could've been interesting...anyway, happy Fourth!

Name:  kari
Comments:  he he he that was cooooooool ^_^ ~Kari~

Name:  CP
Comments:  How patriotic. Seems like something like that WOULD happen if the Z-gang got a hold of fireworks.

Name:  L.A. Whitfield
Comments:  Perfect for the Fourth of July! Looks like they are going to have to make a wish again to restore the forest. Hehehe...

Name:  SISCOL & EBERT DIRECTOR
Comments:  the funniest story i've ever read!!!!lol lol lol lol lol lol funny parts: * "what the heck is that?"-trunks "is it dangerous?-goten "i hope so!"-trunks * "oh I am not hungry"-goku "are you okay dad?"-goten "someone must have hitten him over the head on the way over" -krillin * "vegeta.."-goku "shut up!"-vegeta "but then the rocket exploded"-author * "it landed between the prince's leg pointing at THAT"-author * "the rocket had choazu on it" -author * "vegeta jumped way up, screaming like a small girl, only louder" -author * "the whole forest was on fire. you couldn't imagen how fast everyone left. Well, everyone exept goku. some how he managed never to get hit. He was sitting at the picnic table. He had decided that a little food never hurt anyone" -author recap and review: recap: goku brings fire to a picnic spot, everyone goes crazy and there's a forest fire. review: i loved it, it was different and uniqe, i think I stated why i liked it above. good very good! 10 out of 10. comments: PLEASE WRITE A SEQUIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Name:  ice queen
Comments:  That was Great! Good job! Especially the ending!

Name:  Neiko
Comments:  That was hilarious!! Keep writing!! Luv it ^.-

Name:  Just a Thought
Comments:  If the police had come out there...naw, I don't even want to think about that...

Name:  18
Comments:  That was really funny!!