Name:  mara jade
Comments:  ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! that was utterly fabulous! you are hilarious! and good ridence to little white clowns is all i have to say! ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha h!a ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

Name:  Euterpe
Comments:  ew, sick! but you're right, i never could stand that guy...just what is up with him, anyway?

Name:  clover (aka the best person ever!)
Comments:  funny! very funny I liked it! XD I always write storys like this but mine are harder to understand.... I wanna clown burger!

Name:  Scarlett Fire
Comments:  tee hee! funny!

Name:  anonymous
Comments:  What does everyone hate about Chaozu, anyway? Half the cast are freaks in some way. Your characters are terribly static and make unlikely comments and actions, except for the fiercely overwritten, cartoonish Vegeta. Anyway, if Vegeta fired a REAL Final Flash, it would vaporise Chaozu instantly; same with the other attacks you had him use. If Vegeta fired downwards at Chaozu, it would also disintegrate the Earth, leaving Veggie hanging in space where his lungs would either pop (if he held his breath) or deflate (if he opened his mouth). Likely, he would've used that "two finger" attack, like on the Saibaiman. What's with Vegeta going SSJ4 instantly? It's a pretty complicated transformation, y'know. Furthermore, why didn't anyone help Chaozu? They would have in the show. Overall, VERY poorly researched and written, and I really don't think it's that funny (like, where are the jokes, if this is a "humor" story?) What a turkey.

Name:  Prince Vegeta
Comments:  I actually read this a long time ago but never reviewed it. That was good!! I want a clown-burger!! But one thing bothers me...if Chaotzu is poisonous...why isnt Piccolo dead yet??? He eats enough Chaotzus to feed an army of Piccolos!!!

Name:  s98j
Comments:  Hey! Don't insult Yamcha, Krillin or Tien...but go ahead with the Chau-zhou frying. heh heh. no just kidding, but it was funny.

Name:  Rebecca Waesch
Comments:  *Looks stunned, is speechless and wonders how one person can possess so much crazy and insane imagination!* Woah......

Name:  thefiendishpuppy
Comments:  Yes! KILL CHAOU-TSU!

Name:  Reader
Comments:  ummm...kinda weird but funny

Name:  Quaxo
Comments:  *laughs til she's crying*

Name:  M.Jade
Comments:  Oh man, that was not nice!!! I LMAO. I sorta felt sorry for Chaot-zu . . . almost, but not completely, lol. I never did like him anyway!! Great job.

Name:  TykoFlash
Comments:  What is up with a clown? that was the icing on the cake.You are a Vegita Otaku.More Vegita on Fanfiction!!!

Name:  kakarrot
Comments:  funny hehehehehahahahaha i almost fell down laughing but im in school

Name:  Pixie
Comments:  Well.....I suppose Choazu isn't all that bad. But his voice annoys the hell out of me. >

Name:  Me
Comments:  Bwhahahahahahah... you have got to be the funniest person alive. Great fic and whoever said Chaozou isn't that bad...whatever you say...Anyway I'm glad the cancer patient finally got what was coming to him.

Name:  Vedgy
Comments:  *just laughed so hard she almost peed her pants* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA *ahem* Great story.

Name:  bob
Comments:  This is tasteless. Very tasteless. I don't know why everybody hates Chao-tsu so much. He is not that bad. In fact, he is an honorable little creature. Leave him alone.

Name:  Anija
Comments:  I want a clown burger!Hehe, die Chouzou! YES! THE FREAK IS DEAD! HE'S DEAD! HE'S DEAD! HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Whoo, thanks, I needed that.

Name:  Chelsee
Comments:  PWAHAHAHAHAA!! FINALLY THEY OFFED THAT CANCER PATIENT FROM HELL!!! Woo hoooo!! I can't thank you enough, Steele! I take back ALL the mean things I said about you being short, or one-eyed! YOU ARE THE COOLEST! THIS *SO* HAD TO BE DONE! KILL KILL KILL! MAIM MAIM MAIM!! MUTILATE MUTILATE MUTILATE! Hee hee, deep fry that sucker......Oh, and eating Chouzu WOULDN'Tbe cannibalism for Vegita, since he's a Saiyan and Chouzu is....ah....um...A CANCER PATIENT!

Name:  Vegeta's All Mine NOT Yours
Rating:  (Best)
Reason For Rating:  Oh i loved it, i tought i twas very funny! my compliments to the writer!
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Name:  Unknown *to lazy to sign in*
Comments:  Oh my god! He killed Kenny...er....Chaozou. I ment to say Chaozou, HONEST!